Sunday, September 26, 2010

Assignment 3 (Improved)

For this assignment, I have changed according to the feedback. I changed the order of the photos to a more conventional one. Also, I added a "house" for each of the dogs. As a result, I had to retake the photos.

Initially, I wanted to retake only the photos with the dog houses. However, I didn't manage to do the assignment in the day, so I had to take the photos at night, which produces quite different photos due to different lighting. So I took all the photos again, and also corrected the colors in photoshop (as was taught in the lecture). The photos on page one are darker with a slight reddish tinge, since the setting is from evening to night. I think this new set of photos give a more ominous feel, which sort of suits the story, since it is somehow violent? Here they are:

For Frame 1, I have drawn an arrow pointing from Greeny to Orange's bone, as well as a heart shape, to indicate that he likes the bone. I then used a "two-headed" arrow to show the idea of exchange. The arrows are drawn with dotted lines as solid lines give a more definite feel, but I think the idea of exchanging bones is a rather abstract concept.

Hope this is clearer!

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