Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Assignment 2 (Improved Again)

As required, I did a black and white version of the namecard:
Next, as suggested by Julian, I experimented with the layout by changing the position of the dog. I decided to do the black and white versions first and then add color to the final one.
Dog at the bottom
Dog on the left
Dog on top

I have tried different variations of the positions, but I feel that the compositions of these are better. Out of these four designs, however, I think I still prefer the original one? The layout with the dog at the bottom is interesting, but the abstraction looks too small to me. The dog on the left is more conventional and the dog on top still looks odd. (I've tried positioning it on different sides of the letter "O", as well as on top of other letters, and these don't look good either.)

Different views are welcome, though :) 

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