Assignment 6 (Improved)

I've edited my design according to the feedback. I think I forgot to mention that my classmates suggested for the word "winds" to be more cursive, with swirls, which is what I've done here.

I hope the fonts are not too small. I think the design will look messy if they were any bigger.

I also hope that the first two lines look similar. I've added different colors to the emphasised words to add interest to the design, but since they are different words, the two lines still don't look particularly similar. I also didn't arrange them in a straight line as I wanted "see" and "hear" to be above "clouds" and "winds" respectively. I'd tried arranging them differently and I think this is the best I can do...

Lastly, I've made the blue color of "out" and "sea" lighter as I think they blended into the blue portion of the background when I printed the design for tutorial.