Assignment 4 (Improved)

As suggested, I have aligned the hand with the copy, as well as changed the target audience. There were also comments that the font of the tag line was too small, so I enlarged it. Here's the new version:

And here's the new copy:

"22% of Singapore children thought of suicide."

Suicides, after accidents, are the most common cause of death among Singapore youths, and suicide rates are still on the rise. Last year, 22% of 600 primary school children indicated in a study that they have thought of suicide. Depression, the major cause, may affect up to 17.2% of primary school children.

Every child deserves a happy childhood. Don’t let your child lose out because of academic stress. Talk to your child and find out how he or she is coping. You would not want to see your child depressed, much less be an indirect cause of his or her death.

If your child displays depression symptoms, seek help immediately. For more information, call the Child Guidance Clinic, Health Promotion Board at 6389 2200 or email to hpb@imh.com.sg. 

I got my statistics from this website: http://sg.theasianparent.com/articles/singapore_children_suicide_depression

Hope it's better =)