My group mates said my concept was clear and they can tell that the 4 photos are in the same series. However, the execution could be better. For example, instead of taking still objects, I can take photos of everyday activities in action, or people engaging in the various everyday activities (i.e. waking up, brushing teeth, pouring cereal for breakfast, etc). This makes the photos more "lively".
My group mates also mentioned that the first photo (of the teddy bear on the bed) looks deliberate and not everyday. They mentioned that I can take a photo of a messy bed instead. I think this feedback is really helpful as I didn't realize the problem of others being able to recognize the "posed" photo.
Thus, after the critique session, I decided to make my photos look more lively and realistic. However, I think it may be rather troublesome to get someone to pose for me. One solution may hence be to adopt Hanis's suggestion, which is to take photos with my mobile phone from different angles as I am engaging in everyday activities (i.e. from first person's point of view). I think I can show that the photos are taken with a phone camera by using filters from apps. I'm not sure if this will work out though. Shall upload the photos again.
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